(三)看图写话
看图写话是初中英语作文常考的一种形式,但随着牛津版教材的大量应用,学生的写作能力有了较大的提高,因此中考作文的要求和难度也相应提高。所以,在中考作文中继续出现简单的叙事型看图写话的可能性很小,但有可能会提供给考生一些具有寓意的漫画或图片,要求考生从中发现问题、提出自己的观点,这对考生的逻辑思维能力和英语语言的娴熟运用都提出了更高的要求。
审题:这幅漫画蕴涵了一个深刻的主题即战争与和平,这与当今世界的热点问题密切相关,它不仅考核考生是否能流畅地表达自己的观点,更需要考生站在人文关怀的高度来观察整个世界。
学生作文:
A Represent of Freedom and Peace
Almost everyday we can see there are always a huge number of pigeons
enjoying the sunbath in some large squares, but do you often care what a
white pigeon stands for? That is peace. For hundreds of years, people
always regard pigeons as a represent of freedom and peace. That is because
of not only its lovely pure figure, but also its great passion to the
outside world. Till now, I still can't help thinking of such a picture: In
Iraq, a boy was watching a white pigeon over his head. The background was
full of wounded solders and guns. Thus, this lovely white pigeon was
contrastive to this iced background and gave people a deep consideration.
Suddenly, athought comes into my mind: Why there have been so many wars in
the world just for someone's own interest? Why can't people live like as
mall pigeon with freedom? I hope there will not be wars, FOREVER!
教师评析:应该说,要把这篇看图作文写好是有相当难度的,但考生以非常流畅的笔调从鸽子联想到自由与和平,再联想到发生在伊拉克的战争。文风成熟老练,这在初中生的作文中是难能可贵的。
教师拟评分:10分
[例6]审题:该图要求考生先看懂漫画,对它进行清晰的描述,同时根据其隐藏的寓意提出自己的观点,如在此图中应关注树木被砍伐而提出环保的重要性。
学生作文:
Seeing this picture, we know that these trees have been cut down. But as
a very little baby in the picture, he must be puzzled. He will ask: What
are these? Are these trees? Of course, in our imagination, trees must be
tall, strong and green enough. Actually, his question shows humans a
problem that is worth thinking about. The covering rate of the forest in
the world has kept decreasing these years and it caused a lot of problems
on environment. As we all know, trees are very important in our life. They
can make the air fresher, reduce natural disasters and soon. So I appeal:
Don't cut down trees. Let' s make our earth greener for our later
generation. Don't let the children think trees are only roots!
教师评析:整篇作文结构清晰,全文分三段,第一段详细地描述漫画的内容;第二段阐述其蕴涵的寓意即环保对于世界和后代们的重要性;第三段提出作者的号召,使文章的结尾明快、有力!
教师拟评分:10分
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